Causes of Disappearing Honeybees
What if foods like blueberries, apples, cantaloupes, and milk ceased to exist completely due to the possible extinction of one type of insect? Fast food developments couldn’t even save us from this disaster because according to the National Resource Defense Council 30% of our diet comes from the pollination done by honeybees (Para3). Pollination is the act of transferring pollen to plants in order to stimulate fertilization and reproduction. There is an extensive variety of pollinators on Earth, but the honeybees are the prime pollinators. In fact, Planbee Organization says that 92% of pollination is exercised by the honeybees (Para6). These creatures are critical for human existence, yet they are dying at an increasing rate as the years progress. If they disappear and humanity does not find a pollinator as efficient as the honey bee, then the aliments they provide will abruptly decrease and prices would rise. There are various reasons why the honey bees are dying, but there are many ways that this phenomenon can be prevented.
I know the citings are weird but my teacher wants it that way
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I would eliminate MILK. Cows eat grasses that do not need to pollinate; or at least that is what readers will think. …(fruit and berry) production would not cease to exist completely due to the POSSIBLE extinction. – - – it would be the ACTUAL extinction that would cause the complete problem. [edit: fruits and berries does sound better than just listing a few, at least in the introduction - - < me.} ... and do not forget flowers.
"Fast food developments" is awkward, because people will think of fast food (McDonald's) when you actually mean quick advances (developments) in science and the food growing industry.
Note: everyone knows what pollination is, but I guess it is okay to leave it in there.
(bees) are CRUCIAL, not "critical"
humans or Mother Nature [ not "humanity" ]
Q: what is ” aliments “? {new word, or typo ??.} [do not use words readers do not know]
“abruptly decrease AND PRICES WOULD RISE.” – now you have brought up economic topics, whereas I thought you would be talking about the importance of bees as pollinators, and how to save them.
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