Hi I am 12 years old and I absolutely love to write books, I have finished 2 books already and I was inspired today when I went to the mall and saw these girls who were very prissy and they were such drama queens. When I got home I decided to get started on a book called The Chic Clique its all I could come up with if you have anything better plz help. But I also need help with a girl name. You see I already have two prissy girl names but you see in the story this sorta lame girl calls the popular Emily and wants to hang out (they used to be friends before Emily got accepted into Natalie’s clique) anyway I just need a good name for a nerdy like girl like Danielle or Cassie. No offense to anybody who has those names. Also my story is below if you can give me any constructive critism thx soooo much
The Yvonne’s Mansion
Emily!” Natalie screamed as she applied her Giorgio Armani
Lip Shimmer lip gloss. “Where is she?” Natalie thought to herself. She had twenty minutes before James, her limo driver got annoyed and decided not to take her to the mall.
Natalie walked over to her Tropika mahogany platform bed and sat down. As she lay down she thought to herself. She was starting eighth grade in three days and this year she finally had what she always dreamt of, her own clique. A place where she could be the queen bee, a place where everyone wanted to be like her but then she quickly realized nobody would want to hang with her if she had last month’s Juicy Couture handbag and Betsy Johnson’s summer cardigans.
As she reached to her cell to call Emily she heard a knock on the door. Before she could yell come in the door had clicked open. “Hey-” Natalie stopped Emily before she could go any farther into her excuses “Where have you been?” Natalie got up from her bed and over to her dresser to spray her Dolce and Gabbana L’Eau perfume. A covetable, fruity fragrance filled the air.
Emily coughed “So sorry, my parents weren’t home and I couldn’t leave Jason alone.” Natalie turned around and nodded her head at Emily “He is your five year old little brother; he could’ve stayed home alone!” Natalie turned back around to her mirror and filed her nails.
Emily moved a lock of her walnut brown hair away from her face “Natalie he’s three!” Emily then fidgeted with the Abercrombie and Fitch gray clearance shorts bow she had worn. Natalie then took a deep breath and rescanned Emily’s outfit to make sure it wasn’t a fashion emergency like usual.
Natalie then got up from her Faux Suede Fur Foam Sofa and went to confront Emily about a major fashion dilemma. “So Em.” Natalie twisted her ring around her finger “Where is the shirt from?” Emily could hence a long rule coming on about how you never mix this with this and shop there and there.
Emily continued on in her silence then opened her mouth to answer when Natalie’s mom called from down stairs. “Natalie, lets get a move on James won’t wait forever!” the room grew silent and Natalie just decided to let it go. Emily was relieved.
Natalie grabbed her handbag and cell and headed out of her room, Emily followed. “Mom!” Natalie exclaimed when she had gotten down stairs “Where is my Visa?” Natalie sounded like there was a complete emergency going on just because a credit card was missing. “Just use my American Express!” Mrs. Yvonne yelled back. Natalie replied with a quick “Kay” and a slam of the front door.
As Emily got in the limo she could feel the tension from James. He looked strangely casual today; he wasn’t wearing his usual Alfani black charcoal suit. Today he had a button-down Volcom X Factor in red dress shirt; he accented the look with a Ralph Lauren flannel hooded sports coat along with LRG straight legs jeans.
Natalie then climbed in the limo with a slight screech. Emily laughed “I’m so excited to be going to the mall with you.” Natalie buckled her seatbelt and smiled “Of course you are!” she knew the comeback was a little rude but in order to stay on top she had to keep her reputation snotty and prissy.
As they rode in the car Emily’s cell phone went off. She searched around her Vera Bradley purse until she found it. “Hello?” she answered Natalie tried to figure out it was but all she heard was a small squeamish voice. “Uh Huh.” Giggled Emily “Bye.” She snapped the phone shut and took a deep breath.
Natalie waited a second before asking who it was so she wouldn’t sound too anxious. “Sorry.” Emily laughed “Its okay, who was it?” Natalie questioned. “It was