K, here’s my newest poem that I’ve written. Hope you like!
NOT A FAIRYTALE
I need your smile
It’s been a while
Since you’ve been with me
You’re what I need to see
I can be who you need
I’m gonna follow your lead
If you’re far or near
I’ll be right here
For you and only you
That’s what I’ll always do
I love you more today
More and more than yesterday
There’s something you can know for sure
When you’re sick I’ll be your cure
You make things sound okay
Whether you’re here or far away
Please don’t leave me cuz I need you
Just know that I will be true
I’ll be right by your side
We don’t have to hide
With you is where I want to be
It’s what everyone shall see
Do you love me like I love you?
I only hope you do
It’s like we’re once-upon-a-time
Save me from the tower in which you’ll climb
My knight will come to rescue me
He’ll be here soon, he has to be
Slay the dragon that guards my cell
And come break this evil spell
We’ll be together
From now until forever
We’ll rule this kingdom from now on
Now that the spell is surely gone
You will be the king
Your praises they will sing
I will be your queen
I am no longer in between
We sing sing our royal story
In all it’s pride and glory
We will sing happily ever after
We’ll hear the children’s laughter
But none of this is real
If it’s not the way you feel
But I will not break down
I will keep my made up crown
But I have one thing left to do
I’ll let you know that I love you
I don’t like it…..
I LOVE IT!!!!!!
I am gonna print this and put in my room
You are gonna be a Famous poet when you get older!!!!!!!
Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!
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No offense, but it kind of seems like you’re trying to rhyme WAY too much..
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I disagree with you.
This IS a fairytale, but a true one at least in sentiment.
No one can write this with fakeness in their hearts.
Well done so far but I think there’s a lot of bigger better stuff in you right where this came from so please keep on writing.
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Very pretty
Awesome job!
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