Once a time ago, in the land of Azalea, there was a fairy named Bella. She was very different from all the fairies. She was very young for a fairy; she was about 25 years old. She dressed herself in a yellow dress. Bella always had a smile on her face and she symbolized beauty, life, and strength. Most of the other fairies were full of greed. That was not a good trait at all. Every Monday all of the fairies would have a meeting. This meeting described who they would be assigned to and since Bella was a beginner she would be doing simple jobs. Bella got up out of bed and brushed her hair brushed her teeth, made her bed and took a shower, then got dressed. She ate before she left. It was a Monday night and Bella so left her house to go to the meeting. While Bella was flying there, she and got lost. She suddenly saw a stranger and asked him for his help. He said “sure I’ll help you, just follow me.’ Bella listened and followed the stranger on different paths and then he went into the woods. Who would have knew these woods held a magical spell, which allowed them to hold objects in and hold them for hours. Bella followed but suddenly got frightened of the dark. This stranger disappeared and Bella was so scared she sat in a tree. She didn’t know what to do and she was lost. There was no light anywhere! What a shame, if only she listened to her mother by not talking to strangers. She knew it was getting later and later. Four hours passed, and she heard the noises of crickets and the birds chirping. She heard bees buzzing and wolves barking. She knew the only way to get out of there was to look for an exit. She followed north until she turned right. Then she didn’t see any light, so she flew west. At last she found the light and she flew up. She flew above the trees and higher than birds could fly. She flew all the way to meeting. She saw the stranger there seated in the first row. He abused the powers he had to get her lost and confuse her. She still got an easy job; she arrived there only 15 minutes late. She was lucky this time.
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